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The Forbidden Circle, Chapter 2

Postado a July 1st, 2008 em Drama

Rating: +15
Warnings: some strong language and violence
Main McFLY Charater(s): Tom and Harry (Danny and Dougie do feature)
Summary: Jenny is the little sister of Tom Fletcher from McFly, and he forbids her from going out with any of the band.

Chapter 2

I went back down the stairs and went back into the kitchen, where Tom, Danny and Dougie were not having a flour fight of their own.
“Good God,” I said as I walked in. All three of them turned to face me.
“A new target!” said Tom and grinned.
“Don’t you even think about it!” I said putting up my hands in defence.
“About what?” said Tom putting his hands behind his back and trying to look innocent. I turned and ran from the room. “Oh, that’s unfair! You can’t run away!” I heard Tom call after me.
“Yes I can!” I shouted standing at the bottom of the stairs. Harry appeared at the top of the stairs and slowly made his way down.
“What’s all the shouting about?” he asked as he arrived at the bottom.
“Tom, Dougie and Danny are trying to cover me in flour, so I ran away. I suggest you don’t go into the kitchen if you don’t want to be covered in flour, again.”
“Jenny, we’ve put the flour away now,” came Tom’s voice from the kitchen.
“Should I believe him?” I asked Harry.
“He’s usually trustworthy, but I don’t think so.” he said smiling.
“I don’t believe you!” I should back.
“Please! Believe me! We have put the flour away, haven’t we?” Tom called.
“Yeah!”
“We have.”
I glanced at Harry and we walked slowly down the corridor towards the kitchen. I poked my head around the door, and then got a face full of flour. Tom, Dougie and Danny burst out laughing, and I’m pretty sure Harry was trying very hard not laugh behind me.
“Right,” I said and went into the kitchen. “That’s it!” I grabbed a bag of flour on the table and tipped it over Tom’s head.
A couple of hours later, after large amount of flour had been thrown around the room, the kitchen was once again clean. Everyone had gone and had a shower and they were now sitting in the lounge eating lunch, if you could call many packets of wotsits and some bread lunch! They sat and watched music channels, commenting on the quality of the artist and song.
“Noooooooo!” said Dougie as their new video came on, he got a handful of wotsits and chucked them at the TV.
“Douglas Poynter! What have we told you about throwing food?” said Tom.
“That it’s naughty.”
“No, that it’s a waste of food.”
“Guys, shut up! I want to see this, I haven’t seen it yet,” I protested.
“I don’t!” said Tom and they all got up and left me sitting on my own.
“Right, more food for me!” I shouted laughing at them. I sat and watched the video on my own.
“It’s Safe! You can come back in now!” I shouted when it had finished.
“Thank God,” said Tom coming back into the room, “I hate watching myself on TV!” The others agreed and they took their places on the sofa and we carried on watching the music videos. My phone buzzed in my pocket.
“Argh! Jenny’s vibrating!” Harry shouted, he had been sitting next to me. I hit Harry lightly and pulled my phone out of my pocket.
“Hello?”
“Hello Jenny, I just wondered when you are planning to come home,” I heard my mum’s voice.
“I dunno, whenever Tom chucks me out. Wait a sec, let me ask him,” I put my hand over the mouth piece and spoke to Tom, “mum wants to know when I’ll be home.”
“Oh, don’t ask me. I don’t care, whenever you want to go! Why don’t you stay here and then I’ll walk you back home later.”
“Ok,” I said and put the phone back up to my ear. “Tom said that he’ll walk me home later.”
“All right then, so you won’t be home for dinner?”
“No, I’ll grab something here, you know what it’s like, they’ll be some pizza somewhere, and there always mouldy food in the fridge that I could eat!” I said and laughed and Tom stuck his tongue out at me.
“Very funny, but don’t really eat any mouldy food.”
“Mum! Honestly, I wouldn’t really!” I said and then laughed.
“Yeah, I know, I was just teasing! I’ll see you later then.”
“Yup. Bye!”
“Bye.” I hung up and was about to put my phone into my pocket when Harry grabbed it.
“Harry, give it back! Now!” I said reaching for it, but he held it out of my reach.
“No!” he said “Menu, messages, Inbox.”
“Harry! Give it back!”
“Ohhh! Who’s Tom?” he said as if there was some major gossip involved.
“My brother, you big idiot.”
“Oh yeah! Oooooh what about David? Who’s David? Haha! ‘You stupid lying bitch, who’s David? Some guy who lives next door’.” Harry began to sing.
“Harry, shut up, you can’t sing,” said Danny, none of the others seemed to be worried that Harry had my phone and was reading my messages.
“Anyway, who’s David?” Harry demanded.
“No-one! Just give me my phone back.”
“Fine,” he said and dropped it into my lap. “Meany, you’re no fun.”
“And you’re very immature!” said Dougie.
“My God, Dougie telling someone else they’re immature, what’s wrong with the world?” said Harry and we all laughed.

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4 Comments

Luana at July 23, 2008 said

really nice fiction

more soon plz!

Riah at July 23, 2008 said

“My God, Dougie telling someone else they’re immature, what’s wrong with the world?” AHAH

this seems really good

Amy at July 23, 2008 said

Read this on the forum, just as good second time. (:

Shannon at July 23, 2008 said

Hahaha I really like this :) made me laugh a lot

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